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      So also in letzter Zeit schreibe ich an einem Lied weiß allerdings nicht wie es weitergehen soll.
      Ich würde mich sehr über Kritik und vor allem Ideen Freuen

      Red leaves in spring


      It's getting warmer trees are green
      sun is shining, it can't reach you
      blue sky over you're head
      you can see dark clouds on it

      for you it's almost winter
      inside you're cold like a mirror
      frozen heart sickness in youre eyes
      Red leaves are are falling to the ground
      red leaves in spring

      Go swimming with friends
      you could walk on the ice
      holiday season, fly into vacation
      people like you spend it on north pole

      for you it's almost winter
      inside you're cold like a mirror
      frozen heart sickness in youre eyes
      Red leaves are are falling to the ground
      Red leaves in spring

      Ich weiß ich habe noch nicht sehr viel aber das kann ja noch werden :)
      The best way to cook a fish is not to