"the changeover of seasons" - Kleines Prosagedicht

    • "the changeover of seasons" - Kleines Prosagedicht

      the changeover of seasons


      a person was faltering through the misty forest
      her face was pale like a sheet of balsa
      the ragged clothes were dampish and they did not keep her warm at all
      the feet were moving hardly in the morass

      she always used to wander around in the grove
      the trees once used to appear so friendly and warm
      but now they were suffering from worms
      and staring at her nearly indicting

      the cold clutched her heart
      suddenly she saccaded
      the fragile body collapsed
      is this the end?, she asked herself

      snarling depreciative the mist embodied
      a swirling tangle of white fur sprouted in midair
      the white fox sank to the ground slithery
      and it lumbered to the suffering person

      "if it is me, that you wish, then take me
      kill me and eat my flesh if it is that, you'd like"
      the fox remained quietly
      "go ahead!" she whispered with her very last breathe

      "soon, grass will cover your remains
      and your children will build their houses on it
      they will try and hunt me down like they did before"
      and the fox lifted its head down to the womens body




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